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Monday, January 16, 2006

At a Friend's House

I was at a friends house staying the night and I was laying on the couch when I heard her and her husband maken out. It turned me on so much. They kept the door open so I could watch and heareverything. I think they wanted me to join but didnt ask. So I watched them maken out as I sat there rubbing myself damn I was getting very wet. He was going down on her and all I could think of is my tounge down on her wet pussy and my finger going in and out of her wet pussy. And her sucking his cock. I sat there and thought should I sneek in and see if I could play with them as I rubbed my pussy. I got up and slowly took off my nighty. And walked in thier room as he was eating her I slowly reached down and kissed her and started carresing her breast as i slowly kissed down her neck and my my way down to her breast mmmm slideing my tounge along the nipple and bitting it .. as he looked up and seen me and smiled and came up and joined me sucking on the breast as are tounges joined with a kiss and I slid down even further kissing down her belly smelling the sweetness of her pussy wanting to taste it in my mouth I go further down with my hand rubbing her as his hand is on mine showing me the way as I kiss the outer thigh sit right between her inner thighs Ii open her pussy lips with my two fingers and slowly slide my tounge right over the clit flicking it listing to the juices as my finger goes in and out of her loveing hole mmmm as i lick her starting from her ass to her clit not wanting to stop i barrie my face deep into her pussy darting my tounge deep in her hole in and out in and out as her husband gets behind me and starts to finger me and smacking my as and licking my asshole deeper and deeper I begin to finger my girlfriend in the ass and makeing her squirm all over my face maken her want some so bad maken her beg hearing her moan .. as her husband hands over a strap on I put it on and begin to fuck his wife with it I have her in doggie and slapping her ass so hard maken her my bitch as he is behind me fucking me in my ass ohh god the sound of her wet pussy comming off my toy is suck a fucking turn on and the feel of her juices touching my skin just makes me want more and more. I tell her husband not to stop fuck me hard spank me make me cum as i fuck your wife. I turn her on her back and place her legs way above my head and fuck the shit out of her rubbing her clit with my finger maken her cum over and over. As I cum with her. Maken her suck my cock. Licking all her cum off of my toy ... as her husband watches after he already cam we make out a few more times ..boy what good friends I have

12 Comments:

  • At Mon Jan 30, 04:54:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    so how's the spellin' class comming?

     
  • At Mon Jan 30, 05:09:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    You may want to consider getting an editor to help you.

     
  • At Mon Jan 30, 07:16:00 PM CST, Blogger Savanah Rose said…

    thanks ... I know I am not the best in the world and I know I need a editor but at least I try.. but thanks for stopping by.

     
  • At Mon Jan 30, 10:10:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    It ain't just spelling. Can you read and write?

     
  • At Mon Jan 30, 10:11:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    English class must have been the best place for a nap

     
  • At Tue Jan 31, 07:10:00 AM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    The worst writing I have ever read.
    Don't give up your day job.

     
  • At Tue Jan 31, 10:16:00 AM CST, Blogger Savanah Rose said…

    well...I see most of you think my spelling sucks .. This I know is true. But not all of us are good at everything in life. But believe me letting me know that I suck makes me a better person so thanks ...

     
  • At Wed Feb 01, 02:30:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Your spelling and grammer "sucks". OK. What are you going to do about it? Are you just going to passively accept it, or are you going to improve? There's not having the skills, and there's not bothering to proof-read your own work. If you're not willing to read your own work at least once after you write it, why should anyone else?

    This story isn't just filled with spelling errors. You have the actual wrong word in places. You have very poorly constructed sentences. You have neglected to capitalize words that must be capitalized.

    All these add up to a story with so many errors that it is actively unpleasant to read. I'd imagine that most readers don't even finish it.

    All of these things might be forgivable, except for one thing. You asked for it. You posted your story on Storiesonline, home of some of the finest writers of erotica on the net. People who can write a story that is not just arousing, but well and gracefully written. Stories that are able to draw the reader in by not having glaring errors that pull the reader out of it.

    You owe it to your writing to improve.

     
  • At Sun Feb 12, 09:55:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hey Anonymous,

    If you don't like the grammar, (check your own spelling), or the stories and can only be negative, do us all a huge favor stop reading and commenting!

     
  • At Sat Feb 18, 04:04:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    You're an exciting woman. Don't even think about the spelling comments. Just keep writing these great stories hon.

     
  • At Thu Jan 11, 10:02:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Hey gorgeous Savannah

    WOW what a terrific and yummy story. I would love to be there with you and your gf and her husband yummmmm. keep it up hon formike_4@yahoo.com

     
  • At Mon Jan 22, 05:46:00 PM CST, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Spelling, Grammer both be Damned, HOT Share your stories with me anytime.

    TY

    yndom

     

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